Monday, November 29, 2010

essay # 4 revision

I have many things to revise on my essay. I'm having difficulty with introducing my thesis. Can anyone give me a few pointers. I would appreciate all the help I can get!

1 comment:

  1. What is your thesis?
    If you frame the idea clearly, sometimes it's easier. Also, you want to have a clear idea about what your essay is supposed to say, what it is trying to persuade.

    hope this helps

    ciao
    just a thought

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